Saturday, October 31, 2009

Just another Story. Part-2




Continued fromMind out: Just another Story. Part-1





Anu unlike most of the times grew a bit matured this time. She didn't tell anyone that Rohit called , not even to her best friends Arohi and Rishi. She even didn't give any clue to anyone how much sad, how upset she really was. At last she was able to conceal her feelings somehow - she thought. Arohi lived a bit distant cause she lived in other state for study purposes , so all the time it was not possible for Anu to share everything with her. But Rishi , being Anu's best friend and staying side by side most of the times  ,always understood her, often even the unuttered things. 
But this time, Rishi even didn't understand. May be because Rishi was a bit busy with himself unlike most other times when he always delves in Anu's mind. They were good friends ,  rather best friends for years, not childhood ones though.
Anu was almost a baby to him and together they would look like anything --- brother-sister, girl friend-boy friend, artist and his art, best friends. Rishi and Anu both treasured their precious friendship and they were so much confident that they even did'nt pay any heed to what others' thought of their being together for so much time, because they knew there was nothing 'something else'. Anu continued to flow in thoughts of Rohit , being determined not to place anyone else below Rohit's diadem and not even trying to bring anyone else in her thoughts. And also most of the times she didn't keep her thoughts to herself only, Anu felt secured in the often warm emraces of Rishi, Rishi was there, a safe shoulder to cry on and a safe locker to put all the thoughts and feelings safely locked.

Rishi was a boy with strong wills, dedications , determinations who always respected Anu's all thoughts and feelings, however idiotic at times they may be. Even when Anu used to get upset with guys approaching her, Rishi always calmed her down... But things always doesn't go uniformly. No one really understands the chicanery of fate and mind, however cherubic at times they may be. Enthereal moments they shared were never a sort of billet-doux for them. But 'stupid cupid'  with much patience and time created iridescent hues in Rishi's mind . Yes, Rishi was madly in love with Anu. He tied his mind and tried hard not let Anu know anything about that. But Anu was a girl and above all Rishi's best friend who used to make out so many of his problems even before Rishi thought of telling them to Anu, No exception this time. Anu understood. Again it was somehow a bad situation for Anu, perhaps worse. What to say your best friend , what are the word to console that person who loves you madly but doesn't even expect anything in return!! Anu was again befuddled, about what she should do.!  

 Arohi suggested her not to be the sameway any more. Arohi asked her to stop all her childish behaviours and kiddish requests and throw them away. Anu was sad. She was again on the verge of loosing a friend?!! Rishi didn't allow her to do so. He promised her not to pick that topic again. But Anu thougt she should become bit cautious , so that in no way Rishi should feel or start expecting 'something' in return.
They continue to be friends ; together 'stopping' to think about 'their' future, one trying hard to confide love, One fighting hard to keep safe distance from so much of 'loves' all around.

As the planet rotates our lives also rotate and we never know whats really waiting for us in the next turning point. Just as Anu, Rohit, Rishi , Arohi all waiting for the 'Next'.



THEN GO TO
Mind out: Just another Story. Part -3
Mind out: Just another Story. Part -4
Mind out: Just another Story. Part-5

25 comments:

tristarfivestar said...

wooooooow i liked it ..... but the last one was way better... i like the phone calls :)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Hmmmm...i know why story is turning out like this... this story is on similar lines of "Love is a matter of story" on my blog :)( or may be i am feeling it is going that way)

Story is going the way it goes in real life. So i liked it the way you portrayed but wud be glad if there is a surprise which we human race lack to guess it in the first place...

and yeah, i am happy you carried out it by your self cuz i had something else in my mind for 2nd part and writing it was a difficult thing for me :)

Cheers
Mahesh

chocolate lover said...

hi di loved it..I was eagerly waiting for it..

divsi said...

Aww rimz u described it so well dear:)the rollercoaster ride of the friendship wid rishi n his hiding of feelins:)looked very real:)kip it up!

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

hey this is an awesome story....

i like this one...:D

Yellow Tulip said...

very realistic:)...loved it dear:)...

AJai said...

You seemed to have thought this out a lot. Or it is auto-biographical. I'm actually going to go with the latter.
And Rimz... no need to use such hi-fi vocab. I didn't get so many words. Keep it simple na... I think people enjoy it more like that. Sometimes u need to use a word, I admit... but too many can really get u spinning. this is the first time i've felt it in ur blog. so i'm tellin u.

Miss_Nobody said...

Lovely-thats a classic short story ending...or is there more?I would say the last one was better :)Good writing!

Being Pramoda... said...

wahh rimz... u have explored their bong ver sensitivelyy ...i lovd the way rishi cared her..:)

will wait fr the next one..

vEnKy said...

Is there a part 3 you left this one with a suspense. I guess Anu will end up with rishi.

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

I thought "same old story", but NO, it wasn't. A new perspective has been brought in here that most people find very hard to use. The new perspective is "practicality". There is no attempt to give a sugar-coating and give it a happy-happy feeling. Your story (Part 1 and Part 2) is very close to real life and I can say that because I have seen such love right in front of my eyes (as a matter of fact, a little bit of this has been experienced by me).

A wonderful story indeed. Enjoyed every bit of it.

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

And this statement Anu was almost a baby to him and together they would look like anything --- brother-sister, girl friend-boy friend, artist and his art, best friends." stole the show. Amazing! I wonder how you thought of such a nice sentence!

Miss_Nobody said...

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Rajlakshmi said...

That was beautifully written.. Practical story .. Is there a third part ?
I loved the ending.. That is so much related to us.

Rohit said...

Just read the first and second part..the phone conversation takes the price for me. waiting for the 3rd part..btw..how about adding the surprice element in it ..Anu and Arushi start having feelings for each other and so does Rishi for rohit.. Happy ending..kahaani mein twist! :) nah..kidding. Read through most of your posts in the first page..nice blog here.

Yellow Tulip said...

there is somethin for u:)..do collect it dear

RSV said...

this was beautiful rimz..
I mean u lived out the emotions of the story so well..

but there is some curiosity left sure!!

Arun George said...

Good one!!! especially the last line !!! :)
Just thought of sharing something which I wrote.. http://havenofmythoughts.blogspot.com/2008/11/this-is-just-story.html

Arun George said...
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Arun George said...

The Love that shattered me

Rohit Dassani said...

This series is gonna rock!!

Hey , you have been tagged!!

Arun George said...

Thanks for visiting my blog too!!! :)

beerboy said...

Rishi didn't allow her to do so. He promised her not to pick that topic again. But Anu thougt she should become bit cautious , so that in no way Rishi should feel or start expecting 'something' in return.<<<

so this was the end? buddy eventually whether anu and rishi meet up their hearts again,... or anu will realize it is good enough to trust a best friend's love rather than finding someone else or with the time she will find someone else as the time passes by...

woww this is one different among the one billion loves stories i read

wish you could have new spice in pan

rimz said...

@ All readers:
Thanku ALL for all your comments. I just loved those.
The story will hopefully continue its sequel and hope u'll like it..

Ya I'll try to use don to earth lingo more AJai.

Ur praises really encourages me to write a lot.

Thanku ... keep visiting.
take care...:)

Raj - Only name sake !! said...

I would just say Amazing!!!

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