Saturday, December 5, 2009

Just another Story. Part -4



CONTINUED FROM:  
Mind out: Just another Story. Part-1
Mind out: Just another Story. Part-2   
Mind out: Just another Story. Part -3 

Anu messed up her life. She was trying to sort it out hard, she was fighting to stay jolly among all the odds of her life. While with her family,she always showed her least emotions, thoughts and feelings.She tried to become busy with her work and career issues,as she thought staying busy will take her away somehow from her abundant mundane troubles.


Some day a particular relative of her told her "
You are actually very rude,You have less emotions in you,that's why you can be so harsh on others'. Those who are emotional tolerates the jabberings of the unemotionals like you."  It was quiet hard for her to accept this specific statement, yet she tried to catch up a curve in her face and only one face rose in her mind Rohit .

Another day she was talking to her mom
casually  .
Bending over her lean body Anu murmered "
Mom,I think I need to loose a bit frm my tummy.....

Before she completed her mom gave a stern reply "
You are absolutely ok, rather put on some on that thin figure. What will your in-laws say?!"....

Anu was shocked "
Now wherefrom do they hail from?". 

"
We say nothing to you now, doesn't mean we won't ever say anything.You have to marry.
Whatever you say or whatever you do, You will have to marry,Don't think you will always fly like this and keep on fighting with
people around you..!!


Anu's parents even started showing serious interests in some of the marriage proposals that came for their daughter.
Anu could'nt utter anything, as situations worsened and her dad always scolded her mom whenever she said or atleast tried to speak anything in Anu's for, against marriage stuffs.

Anu could'nt carry on with the argument, left the room in utter disgust.

Earlier she always had Rishi by her side to share all these itsy-bitsy things,but now she preferred not to share.
For quiet a number of days she was absolutely without contact with Rishi; recieved none of his calls, replied to none of his SMSes. One day when Rishi couldn't take it anymore he
came to meet Anu at her home, but she didn't even came down to meet him. This was like a shock to Rishi.However strong his heart could be diagnosed his atrium and ventricles were not strong enough to tolerate such behaviour from his best friend and the one whom he loved so much. He started to try to cope with such strange behaviour of Anu, but in vain. It was hard , very hard....

The problem was that, he couldn't still understand why exactly Anu was upset with him and was denying to interact in anyway with him, and also he was not able to discuss the matter with anyone.
He cried hard.It was one of the rarest times in his adolescence when Rishi cried!! He spend days without food, all alone in his room, without letting anyone outside know, what storm was going inside.

He fell ill, tremendously ill. Mental trauma along with physical weakness carried him almost near death.
Anu's arrogance still prevented her from getting in contact with her ill best friend. Her mind and brain fought. Arohi suggested her again and again to go and see him before anything more serious and difficult happened.
Once again Anu was in dilemma - To go or not to go...if she goes and if Rishi thinks that she had feelings for him-all these things started cropping in her mind and gulped her days and nights.She sat blank for hours with random romantic songs running in her ear via the cord of her ipod.She thought she had no idea of her life after being financially established. She thought of the mosquito that was trying to squeeze in between her ear and headphone, she thought of it, that it never knew it would be dead the next moment.  Among all these non-sense thoughts she couldn't arrive at the final decision that was enough urgent to be made. Procrastination was now a part of her especially on some points..!

She only muttered " God,  why why ,why always these things happen with me??"


Then: 
Mind out: Just another Story. Part-5
Mind out: Just another Story. Part -6

11 comments:

Ashish said...

Rishi's situation is very similar to almost every 2nd guy...

and Anu should go to see Rishi

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

What can I say! There is twist, drama, conflict and everything that keeps a reader hooked on. Anu's conflict and Rishi's misery are so well brought out. The anguish can be felt by the reader. Very nice. I have a feeling that I am starting to belong to this world of Anu, Rishi and Rohit.

chocolate lover said...

:))

abc said...

awesome, just waiting for more....bt situations hv complicated soo much. i wonder how ll d thigs fall in rite place agn...

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Gosh! This is too much of twists in normal life of hers..

Rishi's seems to be a senti guy and what he is suffering from is something that can be understood.

As for Anu's perspective is concerned: To her, her bestfriend's health must be a priority, later she can manage that illusions.

This traingle seems to have a genaralised pattern. I mean, its really easy to relate this characters.. :)

Good going...


BTW how many parts r u planning to have? :P i am wishing to see pairs asap ;)

Cheers
Mahesh

Yellow Tulip said...

wat ever her probs..i still think she should go n see Rhisi...doesn't she value her relation?...its not fair u know wat she is doing...she jus cant ignore someone thinking wat if he misunderstands her intention!!.

:)...but but..tats only my point of view..waiting for new twist again:)...god one:)..its really hard to let go...hmmmm :)

sp.ajay said...

the writer of a story knows best what is supposed to come next!

i will repeat what i said in my last comment, "when is the next one coming?"

prashslash said...

this gets better and better with every protraction .. mystery building... awesome :D

IdleMind said...

Guess Anu is too hurt by her surroundings, and that's what keeps her away. Rishi, to me, goes through the natural turbulence of a young adult in love!

The conflict has come back, and hope this time there's a solution in sight! :)

rimz said...

@ashish:
lets c wat anu does nxt..:)

@vittal:
thanku for feeling such.. hope i can keep u hooked to d stoy line..:)

@chocolover:
:)

@abc:
thanku dear..yep things r complicated in real lyf too, isn't it?

@mahesh:
I myslf still dnt hve much idea hw long dis one goin to stretch..lets c..nd pairs..!! well lets c, weder its possible to make or not..:)
tc.

@yellow tulip:
haha ..it seems u hve taken it as too real life..dts nice..i like it.. lets c wat happns nxt..:)

@sp.ajay:
nxt one will come wen it's time will arrive..:0
hope u r liking it..kip coming.
tc.

@prashlash:
thanku soo much..:)...praising is a sort of encouragemnt..:)

@idlemind:
hmmm...lets c where who finds what solutions..
thnx fr visiting. kip coming..
tc,.

Anonymous said...

wow....really superb.....am waiting for the next part......

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