Monday, October 19, 2009

Just another Story. Part-1


Its almost two years now ,of break up between Anu and Rohit.

Anu loved Rohit from the time she started understanding the meaning of 'love', in her early teenage.But ,destiny played game with her.
He moved far away from her, with no scope of contact and rohit had no idea about her feelings at all. They were not friends, not among relatives even, they just knew each other..

Some seven years later they met. Anu was overwhelmed, just by realising Rohit recognised her face , seen long seven years back. Nothing went wrong then onwards. Rohit approached her and proposed her even, which was almost a chimera to Anu for years. So many people told her and tried to convince her that she couldn't wait for someone or 'just' love someone without seeing or even knowing much about him,  for soo many years . But she did, at least, then she believed she did.
Time passed on . Those were the happiest days of her life. Those moments, those thoughts , feelings...yeah,she got the man she loved , though she never desired. She loved without any expectations. she loved without a little bit of hope of getting Rohit ever in her life. So when in reality things happened that way  ,it was not really a dream come true for her. She never dreamt of that. She prayed for him, loved him, even wished him to be happy with someone else if he was in love with someone else( she
had no idea though what was going in his life or whether at all anyone was in his life).

Good times never lasts. It was not an exception for Anu's airy-fairy tale and her hunky-dory world.
They broke up. She was having adjustment problems. A number of times she started feeeling she was insulted , her morale, her principles were looked down upon, and often crushed even. She couldn't tolerate all those. As they were together ,breaking all prognostications, they parted breaking all predictions.

He was first in her life, but she was not the first one in his life. After Anu and Rohit broke up, Rohit went back to his first girlfriend(oops love..!) who claimed she always loved him , though Rohit left her due to some mere misunderstandings.
But Anu was alone. She loved to live that way, without inculcating any other 'especial' person in her life. She was happy being alone. She had no expectations from anyone.
The only thing changed in her was her mentality. She was determined not to be committed again. She was prepared to lead the rest of her life by her own. She didn't feel anybody's need in her life any more.

Days passed.
Rohit was traversing his ups and downs of life with another girl by his side --- this thought often hurt Anu, and often she was satisfied and happy thinking Rohit was no longer morosed for her,he was no longer living their memories as Anu still did.

Two years later on Rohit's birthday Anu wished him via SMS,not a call. He thanked and called her. It was 12.26 A.M. The conversation went. ...


Rohit[R]: Hello....

Anu [A]: Hello.

Rohit: how are you?

Anu: I am well as always...

R: Good.

A: yeah I know.

R: so.... whats going in your life?

A: studies, exams, gossips , music and everything thats required for me and myself.

R: Well thats essential part of life. What else, whats goin on in your personal life? Is there anyone now in your.......

A: No, I didn't feel any requirement of anyone else in my life. And what all happened in my life even if I blame someone,Its me.....

R: You are still very angry on me, right?

A: Why should I be? I am happy with whatever life gifted me. I never thought of getting it. I have no objections or complaints against anyone. And I don't blame myself generally, Cause I love myself the most on earth.And well the way I felt myself to be insulted, I want none any more. What do you think if you now wish me to be back in your life I'll be...Never.

R: Hmmmm ...Good, thats very good ki you don't blame yourself....

A: yeah I know, and apart from that there are actually soo many things going on in my life. Each week rather each day of my life is eventful for me...

R: Do you still remember me often?

A: Why should I?

R: Answer my question.

A: (Anu's voice started trembling and cracking....) Why should I remember You?

R: You are lieing...I know you are. Have some water now.

A: Yeah I had, Why should I lie?

R: Can't you answer a single answer properly and straight? You are not in your best manners now....

A: If I am not, Well I can't behave better than this....

R: You have remained the same...

A: Hmmm....

R: I am feeling sorry now, I didn't wish you on your b'day. Actually something very wrong was or is still going on in my life..I'll tell you someday....Sorry I didn't wish you...

A: Doesn't matter. I didn't expect or want anyone's wish.

Rahul: Well I didn't ask for your opinion, I said I felt sorry for not wishing...Actually today after coming out of office all of a sudden I remembered you...

Anu: ok ok....sorry...

R: Hmm.. so now ,can I give you a call ,often?

A: Whats the use?

R: Why don't you answer a single question clearly...Can I call you?

A: No, please no, No need. I am happy with the past memories, I don't want to refresh them And I don't want you as my friend or brother or any other thing on earth. I loved You and I still cherish many of my memories with you. Its better to relish ice-cream frozen and chicken soup hot... Will you like them the
other way round??

R: hmmm okk....so... now go to sleep...

A: hmm ok(no words were coming out now)..bye. good night...

And She hung up.... Then she burst into her usual tears. But this time this phone call made her stronger. She felt bad when he asked him whether she still remembers him or not, whether he can still call her or not..Didn't he really knows the answers.!
So what was his purpose?! To cool her down and consolate her, Or her first love again left him and he wanted Anu back.!!
Why are some rather most men so insensible, so selfish,and so unfeeling...!! Anu wondered.
She spoke to herself and once again confirmed her determination of not committing to anyone in life... One who hardly respected her thoughts, her feelings.. one who was so obfuscated with himself that he hardly looked around...He asked soo many questions.
But she hardly did any.Perhaps she didn't have any curiosity , or perhaps she had all the answers...!!
She had one question to ask "How are you?"..But she didn't ask. Because she thought she would be sad with any of the answers.
It was already very late and she was more than tired physically and mentally.....she thought and thought untill sleep engulped her and relieved her.


THEN :
Mind out: Just another Story. Part-2 
Mind out: Just another Story. Part -3
Mind out: Just another Story. Part -4
Mind out: Just another Story. Part-5

35 comments:

tristarfivestar said...

ohk all i have to say is wooow!!! how did you come up with this? at times i like these kinds of stories. i really liked the detail description of the phone call ..it gave me a picture of a movie :)

tristarfivestar said...

so will there be a next part?

Monty.Chesterz said...

Yea, waiting for the sequel.

Sunshine said...

Nice flow of writting. And i loved the way you put the things across

Shruti said...

Rimz,
This is beautiful yaar! A girl avoids the guy even after she loved him so much! This s a damn cool attitude!

Anoop said...

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm...
nice...

but y did he ask her if he can cal her again??
is thr a 2nd part for this??? khe khe khe...

waitin... ;)

Being Pramoda... said...

hey..

touching one..i was lost in the story especially while reading their phone conversation.. she was soo good at ther attitude and that was the right decision though..

but i hope, she would get some grt moment yet again in her life..i wish her all the best ..:)

Well written gal..

Uncommon Sense said...

hey thats a nice story...liked it a lot..

Atulya said...

Well.. can relate to it... cool one..

divsi said...

good one rimz!! waitin for the next part...:))
kip writing!!
cheerz!!!:))

chocolate lover said...

hey rimz, its so nice..
waiting for th next part...
write soon..
byeeee

RSV said...

hey rimz
his name was rohit or rahul??
uska naam hi badal dala he..he..

RSV said...

btw a very good post...specially the lines
As they were together ,breaking all prognostications, they parted breaking all predictions....

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Rimz,

You wont believe it.

This is my story, i mean i feel that anu's part is perfectly shows me.

Sometimes i wonder,sitting alone, why does it happens to us? Why cant we explain to them, how much we love them? Why dont they consider giving a chance? Hell with them.

I Used to feel like falling in Love and now, today standing at this position, i regret for that feeling cuz the heart that cries all alone is so painful to me that i hardly wish myself to see stable in life with such a pain..

Very very well written :)

Keep writing :)

Cheers

Jzt 4 me... said...
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Jzt 4 me... said...

The story took me some years back..I had to witness one such story in real life....happening right in front of me...This is why some say...all stories are not just imaginory...One that is imaginory for you might be life for somebody else...Good way of putting it down...but in reality, this story can and did have so many parts following...I am just very new to blogging..maybe some day, I might put in one such story in words...a real story taken down from memories...

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

In case if you haven't planned, Let me know..i would try to write the next part to it...

Decision is all yours :)

Cheers

Ekam said...

Wow! I loved this story. I hope there's a sequel to this story. I would love to read that.

rimz said...

@ALL:

THE NEXT PART IS YET TO HAPPEN TO BE WRITTEN.....:)....
WHILE I WROTE THIS ONE I HAD NO INTENTIONS OF WRITING FURTHER. NOW, LETS C WHAT HAPPENS NEXT WORTH WRITING...:)



@Mahesh :
well, I NEED SOME TIME FOR LETTING U WRITE D NEXT PART. Actually I m waiting fr smething. Thanx for the offer.
Will definitely keep it in mind...:)Thanx a ton...:)

Harini said...

Hmmm... I m trying to figure out what is gonna happen next :P. So i hope you stop ma mind from going crazy with curiosity and post soon. Btw... I dint like that guy, till now atleast :P.

Yellow Tulip said...

hope u'll write the sequel dear...its jus wow...:)...very nicely written...specially the conversations...its soo typical cod jus see...for guy's oneliner girls usually give a para r sometimes a story!!:)...good one:)...story is very realistic...:)

Rohit Dassani said...

Lovely....! Made me smile :))

Shruti said...

Hey Rimz, Visit my profile, Something is waiting for you :)

Rajlakshmi said...

aww that was so sad... i almost felt like crying... beautifully narrated ... and hope that there is a sequel with a happy ending :)
keep writing...

abc said...

it really dint seem 'just another Story'.
awesome. kip it up...:)
tk cre..

Riya Rocks said...

heart touching story... :)

Singh Amit said...

Liked the story..
Especially their conversation part...:)
Reflecting the emotion so vividly...:)

Cheers!!

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Pranab said...

Gr8 writing..could relate to it..

chocolate lover said...

can I call you di coz you r elder than me and I feel weired to take your name..

Rohan said...

Man, I just felt like i was that girl and that guy was my ex, seriously !

This story made all the past mistakes come back to life !

Loved it, U got yourself a regular reader for sure!

Cheers

vEnKy said...

Seems like ego problem

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

This is simply superb and the attention to every detail (be it emotions or the surroundings) is simply amazing. Onwards to Part 2. :-)

Raj - Only name sake !! said...

Wonderful narration :)
Excellently written!!

way to go :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

wow..i know what it feels like being Anu though I havent been into a relationship yet..so good..nice story..

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