I stay happy and jovial
With no thoughts at all.
Often I think I have become numb,
Those pinning thoughts and words
No more scratches in or screeches in
My mind, yeah I have become numb....
I lead a happy life..
But when the city sleeps and
The curtains go down,
When I plan to 'catch a falling star'
And 'save it for a rainy day',
When the clocks' hands go far
Beyond midnight,
When I actually realise my
Whole day's works and no-works
Those pains and unuttered emotions
Creep back to mind and brain.
How I withstand them all...!
I myself wonder.
They say, I am sensitive,
Also ,they say I am brave.
They say 'Shes the man',
Also, they say 'You are only a girl'.
Just flummoxing me all the more...!
How I bear all the curses of death
From the ones who claimed
They love me the most on earth!!!
Often I do get twitched by the words
With a hundred words bursting out of my head.
It becomes hard to bear the false denunciations.
Many a times I am accused
Of the incidents I never knew
Had happened....!!!
But they happened...!
For them it happened...!
They say it happened...!
And who made it happen?
' I '
D'uh...what a life....
Its better to be numb sometimes....
The thoughts go in oblivion
Gradually as the new day begins...
And with new rays I forget All
My grudges and complaints.
Then I dont care a bit
About who says what, I am the boss...:)
Thats the life....
37 comments:
WoW! It's beautiful! really eloquent thoughts! :)
love Sreya
i second Sreya on this one! its quite captivating words!
An innocent yet strong mind speaking .. this is what I felt after reading !!
"Its better to be numb sometimes....The thoughts go in oblivion" .. This could be used as quote .. the best lines !
keep writing ... u've got a reader in me !
Just keep writing endlessly :)
I feel the verse to be a reflection of deep rooted feelings of a teen...
very well written and as already been pointed out....words used articulately to make the reader feel their effect..
keep going.. and yes nice pic!!(in the post)
btw, i also updated my blog
very captivating ..!
You surely have a way wth words..:)
Keep Going
Very very well put... I can understand clearly.. I've been through.. going through such thoughts...
awesome verses..really cool poem..will be here for more!!
its better to be numb sometimes
@Guria:
Thanku...
I dint think dis one wud b liked dis much..:)
@Leo:
Thanku dear. i hve jst tried...Bt ur works n words r jst awesome, they speak a ton... i love dem...:)
@Sourav:
Thanx. Ya, i'll kip on writing unless i truely become 'totally' numb..:)
hope dt dsnt happen..:)
@R S:
hi..thanx fr liking the piece n d pic.
ya i visited ur blog..:)
kip writing.:)
@Vyshu:
Thanku dear fr liking the piece ....
@Sowmi:
thanku dearie for likin n understanding the feelings expressed..:)
@Rahul Anand:
hie. thanku fr liking it.
u r welcome to my blog. n ya kip coming..:)
@Scralet:
yep, it is..
thanx fr droppin by...:)
Awesome...u write soo well... kip it up.
kip on writing more n more...:)
MY first visit here; you have a nice blog.
This one is a good piece of work..:) keep it up. "After every sad day, there is a glad day" keep smiling..:)
Pramoda
Free minds speak a lot, and silent words shout a lot... dat was descriptive though, i lved it....ALL THE BEST, keep writting :) will follow ur blog
They say 'Shes the man',
what is this yaar : )
very well written. I suck writing poems like this.
soo nice expressions. seems lyk i cn feel dem...
luv
Andy.
@abc:
thnx fr visiting.
kip droppin.
@Pramoda:
hie. thnx fr droppin n likin it.
tk cre..:)
@sonali:
hie sonali welcome to my blog. thnx fr likin n followin it. tk cre.
@VeNkY:
"shes d man" is actually a name of a movie....:)
@Andy:
thanx dear fr likin it.
tk cre.
nicely put!!!
being numb is sumtimes very fruitful, alas...emotions and thoughts always pervade somehow:(
nice one!
she's the man!!
u put it well.....do u really care?
@Saim:
thanx for dropping by.. ya thots n emotions always comes out some how , sme way or d other..:(
@Vikas Chandra:
thanx.
i do care often, when i hve to care..:)
so sweet!!:) n so damn candid!
@divsi:
thanku...
Really like the ending.. kinda frees u from everything..
Really like ur writing.. and ur blog too..
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"Then I dont care a bit
About who says what, I am the boss...:)
Thats the life...."
Perfectly putted.. Seems like words are your slaves...
Kip 't up!!
hmmm....im quite mesmerised by your ever captivating lines...bringing out ur strong side...nicely written..thums up...:)
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