You are so away.....That
Your smell no more tingle senses,
Though in a crowd often it seems
You are just around...
But I know you are away...
Light years away,
More away than I
Ever expected you to be.
Care- I see it everywhere,
I never wished to have it so much.
I don't like them to care,
Yet they do, but
You don't .
Your smell no more tingle senses,
Though in a crowd often it seems
You are just around...
But I know you are away...
Light years away,
More away than I
Ever expected you to be.
Care- I see it everywhere,
I never wished to have it so much.
I don't like them to care,
Yet they do, but
You don't .
Its just like I am in the mid ocean:
"water water everywhere, but not a drop to drink"!!
They swear to follow me everywhere,
You too did, but you broke the promise.
But I don't care whether they'll keep it or not.
Night knows the pain,
Pillows know the tears,
They cannot consolate, they know.
You can consolate, but you don't know.
"water water everywhere, but not a drop to drink"!!
They swear to follow me everywhere,
You too did, but you broke the promise.
But I don't care whether they'll keep it or not.
Night knows the pain,
Pillows know the tears,
They cannot consolate, they know.
You can consolate, but you don't know.
15 comments:
Superb!
Excellent wonderful ,what else to say!!
Awsome ! Loved the last 2 lines a lot :)
As usual... a gr8 one again.. keep going...
What a wonderful poem! The yearning has been described absolutely brilliantly. I remembered the saying, "Those who care will never make you cry." The last line "You can consolate, but you don't know" is so true and brings a nice closure. I have a new one up at my blog. If you aren't busy and you can spare a few moments, do read it.
that is so beautifully written...
nicely worded and expressed
great one !!
that was beautifully written!
excellent 1... absolutely emo :D
that's one sad poem.....the longing to get what one desires is well expressed....what could be more painful then the indifference of ones lover...
its beautiful..... loved it.... :)
take care and keep writing...........
beautiful..
I loved the 1st 4 lines on this one a lot. The whole poem is good. LOng time no see.
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