tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post497961844555339708..comments2023-11-04T15:56:22.680+05:30Comments on Mind out: Just another Story. Part-5rimzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01397051720324170082noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-41057161469617555152010-02-06T09:47:23.972+05:302010-02-06T09:47:23.972+05:30Nice One.. the way u described the feelings of a g...Nice One.. the way u described the feelings of a girl in diary was really sweet and true.. hope that either of the one understands...Atulyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03508049859185699503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-11361047747398079782010-01-25T23:36:00.423+05:302010-01-25T23:36:00.423+05:30Read all ur story parts in one go...found it reall...Read all ur story parts in one go...found it really gripping<br /><br /><br />I am a new blogger in the ckt.need some readers for a boost.Inviting u to my blog <br />http://www.telemachuslives.blogspot.com`Sree`https://www.blogger.com/profile/12084705896231840175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-58587727310333782292010-01-24T12:42:23.406+05:302010-01-24T12:42:23.406+05:30Yes... now that was good. Very real.. very believa...Yes... now that was good. Very real.. very believable.. full of feelings, emotions, drama. That was nice.<br />But get even better k. Looking forward to JAS-6. :)Ajaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06096062450350922403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-67819754295291678672010-01-22T15:48:08.205+05:302010-01-22T15:48:08.205+05:30I did not expect this story will take a turn this ...I did not expect this story will take a turn this way. Its totally unexpected.<br /><br />I think in many ways Anu is right in that decision and you could have used her own realization phase to send across the message rather having written in a diary. Thats just a suggestion on using the idea of diary writing. Nothing serious though.<br /><br />These are the situations when both the sides suffer. One intentionally becomes the victim and second was always the victim.<br /><br />Very nice move so far.. I would really be glad if you give a happy ending to this story somehow which seems next to imposable now after witnessing so many heart breaks in this story.<br /><br />Come back with next part soon.<br /><br />Cheers<br />MaheshMahesh Sindbandgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17099095274767291078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-58642565370598269922010-01-22T15:47:34.846+05:302010-01-22T15:47:34.846+05:30Hi Rimz !! Well this is my first visit to your blo...Hi Rimz !! Well this is my first visit to your blog and neither i have read the past part of the Story but this part is fantastic !! I Enjoyed reading it !!Beautiful Story !! Will Be back !Unseen India Tourshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02181236800235013022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-41200538318325735332010-01-22T13:59:32.298+05:302010-01-22T13:59:32.298+05:30Nicely entwined.
People feel hurt and when that ha...Nicely entwined.<br />People feel hurt and when that happens, they generally point fingers at others for hurting them whereas the plain fact is.... it is an emotion born out of our unfulfilled expectations.<br />In the story ,it is rather difficult to understand Anu's psyche, she puts a barricade so that she does not become responsible for hurting others who expect from her , while in her subconscious mind she doesn't want to be hurt.<br />A line from Graham Greene 's novel came to mind immediately after reading the story "No human can completely understand other and no one can arrange for other's happiness "...., how silly we are to be scared of loneliness.....Sunil Balanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14806041150956325741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-25632744111875131722010-01-21T18:53:48.950+05:302010-01-21T18:53:48.950+05:30How I missed you at my blog and how I missed your ...How I missed you at my blog and how I missed your posts here. I am mighty pleased to see a post here and that too the much awaited continuation of this story.<br /><br />This story is getting better and better. I loved the dilemma, the conflict, and the so beautiful diary entry. It is so real. I am so blown away.itsyvitsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11163127814904396350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-16713344506225244572010-01-21T15:05:41.660+05:302010-01-21T15:05:41.660+05:30so sweeet..story is turning out to be so beautiful...so sweeet..story is turning out to be so beautiful n keeping me hooked too..its true that we can never show our love , as others want to see , but still we love ...sharing with diary part was the best part of the story :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-77996765185939524352010-01-20T20:06:04.205+05:302010-01-20T20:06:04.205+05:30the story is getting more dramatic... i hope anu w...the story is getting more dramatic... i hope anu will understand sooner or later :)<br />touching... and well narrated :)Rajlakshmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05947753574286557864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-78505267579644587562010-01-20T17:55:17.414+05:302010-01-20T17:55:17.414+05:30Plzzz continue regularly....plzzzz!! Nice one!!Plzzz continue regularly....plzzzz!! Nice one!!Rohit Dassanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17660313672255263119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-57953238061410466212010-01-20T10:43:42.546+05:302010-01-20T10:43:42.546+05:30it was lovely...same feelings which were on my min...it was lovely...same feelings which were on my mind when I was in the same situation...so true and the decision taken by Anu is right...It's better to hurt once in comparison to again and again :)Ordinary Galhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04945950946807829860noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-37335664366864931262010-01-20T04:06:46.946+05:302010-01-20T04:06:46.946+05:30this again proves that you shouldn't always sa...this again proves that you shouldn't always say the "THRUTH" to a girl... she might not like it...Ashish Gouravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13367298859443158406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-38033228332367776552010-01-20T01:02:11.515+05:302010-01-20T01:02:11.515+05:30amazingly wrritten..great !! diary part is too goo...amazingly wrritten..great !! diary part is too good and its true that its 'diary' only who finally took grasp everything from our heart :) !!!<br />Keep writing !!जोगीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05811790160070544566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-32609757777081274252010-01-20T00:27:47.267+05:302010-01-20T00:27:47.267+05:30awwwwe...life s soo complex indeed...
its painful ...awwwwe...life s soo complex indeed...<br />its painful fr both of dem..abchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04595196663304422206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-59350117717008061662010-01-20T00:24:08.632+05:302010-01-20T00:24:08.632+05:30Wooooow!!
The dairy part is very very true and to...Wooooow!!<br /><br />The dairy part is very very true and touching .<br />Excellent post!!Raj - Only name sake !!https://www.blogger.com/profile/05429791604057482910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4595927141381981929.post-16208503888402439292010-01-19T23:45:08.476+05:302010-01-19T23:45:08.476+05:30beautiful dear... story gets better with each post...beautiful dear... story gets better with each post.. very realistic.<br /><br />my best frien says "if u had to love someone (rishi here) jus cos he loves u, then brad pitt wod had to marry his every fans!"...<br /><br />i liked the decision A took but not the reasons she gave... she doesnt know hw rishi wod really react if she jus said she dint love him n jus move on. who knows he might honor her wish n let his feelings never affect anything. she also refuses to give a chance for him to explain himself, i jus felt like cos of her fears and anticipation of worst possible situation, she's in a way lettin the worse nightmare to come true. doesnt her 'once' best frien relation deserve a chance?... u cant control the way u feel i agree but dont u think its worth fighting for?... <br /><br />sorry if i was harsh... dint mean anythin harm.. jus ur story is too good:)... makes me wonder all these things!!..<br /><br />keep penning:) take care...Yellow Tuliphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01976804180920335379noreply@blogger.com